Hours filled with thoughts roll before me…
I’m dreaming of travelling north,
as I watch silver trains roll on by me,
floating like ghostly silver smoke.
But this stale, clingy south surrounds me like flowers,
that brighten my eyes as I dance,
trying to provoke me to stay and to keep me.
So I sit in the street where my hope is my chance.
I sit and I think, and I dream,
and I find myself floating in the smoke
and running through wind,
and my thoughts roll before me,
and the hours fill my mind…
C.2022, Francisco Bravo Cabrera, 19 FEB 2022, València, España
So beautifully written, Francisco! ♥️
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Thank you so much Bianca 💗💐🙏
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It’s my pleasure, Francisco! 😊♥️
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Beautiful poem sir.
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Thank you 🙏🏻 so much Sir.
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Lovely.
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Thank you Anna!
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Melancholic poetry, how beautiful melancholy is
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Thank you Flavio!
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publish, publish, publish, its simple you can do it yourself ami.
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I know, it is in my plans for this year, but so far, two months into the year and I have been quite busy with many things. But you are right mon ami. Have a great week!
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🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻 muchísimas gracias 🙏🏻
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Francisco, your poem stood out to me with its sense of movement and stillness, how it captures longing, and the pull between places.
I appreciate the opportunity to reflect on your work. I shared my HOURS review, which you can find at this link. I’m looking forward to reading more of your poetry. Keep writing and exploring your voice. Best, Adam
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Very much appreciated Adam, thank you!
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Francisco, your poem stood out to me with its sense of movement and stillness, how it captures longing, and the pull between places.
I appreciate the opportunity to reflect on your work. I shared my HOURS review, which you can find at this link. I’m looking forward to reading more of your poetry. Keep writing and exploring your voice. Best, Adam
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Thank you so much Adam, I greatly appreciate your words. Phenomenal! All the best.
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Very good!
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Thank you Tony, very much!
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Beautiful poem.
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Good day Sir! And thank you for your kind words. Hope you are having a lovely day.
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