Poem: «T E M P L E S»

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My skin absorbs the dust of frozen centuries,

the dust remains like footprints in the sand,

and I stand frozen like a marbled drop of yellow rain.

“TEMPLES” is a poem in what I have termed the Euro-Ku.  This style borrows the name and part of the idea that gave form to the traditional Japanese Haiku.  However, I have changed most of the rules that govern the composition of that well known form. In the Euro-Ku the verses…they are still only three…do not have to have the same syllable count as in the Haiku.  The three verses should flow into each other in a coherent and obvious fashion and should be written in the contemporary vernacular, as if one were writing the lyrics of a pop song.  The meaning and the message should be intended for the proletariat; clearly understood by all.  It should not be hidden within confusing and archaic…researched…words.

C.2022, Francisco Bravo Cabrera, 22/02/2022, Valencia, Spain

This is the proto-version of the Euro-Ku. But on very soon came the first actual Euro-Ku…

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  1. Avatar de christinenovalarue christinenovalarue dice:

    💛

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  2. Avatar de janetsm janetsm dice:

    I like this one, too!

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    1. Greetings Janet and thank you so much!

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      1. Avatar de janetsm janetsm dice:

        You’re welcome, of course. Your poetry gets better and better!

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      2. Thank you so much!!!

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