Poem: «Femina. Feminae»

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FEMINA. FEMINAE

Is there a longing to impress, to brave the storm and be among the best?

Is there a rhythm to a beating heart that does not rest?

I am the symbol of the light, the struggle, I am the expressed.

C.2022, Francis Bravo Cabrera, 23-02-2022, Valencia, Spain

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On the 23rd day of February, 2022, I presented publicly a form that I had been working on and developing for quite some time. I named it…tentatively…the Euro-Ku, in homage and recognition of the Haiku. I have always been a fan of Haikus, especially those written by Zen Masters. However, I knew that as a Westerner I was not placed in this world to live and write as does a poet from the East. But my admiration for the philosophy, the art and the poetry of the East led me to attempt to emulate, of course within the structure of my own, European culture, the Haiku.

Now I have had more time to think and contemplate…even meditate…on the Euro-Ku and I am thinking of a new name, or a sur-name: The «Canticum Novum» or the «Carmen». Both terms can be translated to «song» in the English language. It fits with the explanation I gave, which stated that the words employed in this form be words of the everyday language of the people, not the over-searched «poetic» language of the very cultured few. Therefore I suggested that the content of the verses be similar to the lyrics of popular songs. Circular logic would then indicate that the name «Carmen» or Canticum Novum» would be quite appropriate.

What do you think?

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In recognition of the struggle for equality and for the end of gender violence, we here at Omnia Caelum Studios Valencia support a world free of violence against women and have zero tolerance for such crimes.

El colectivo de Omnia Caelum Studios Valencia, reconoce la lucha por la igualdad y por el fin de la violencia de genero y se une al deseo de un mundo libre de violencia machista. Decimos no a la violencia, zero tolerancia.

11 Comentarios

  1. Avatar de jonicaggiano jonicaggiano dice:

    This is a beautiful idea and what an excellent choice of both photo and beautiful words to showcase your created idea. How very wonderful Francis. I love it! Big hugs to you both!

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    1. Thank you Joni! I am so glad you like it! It’s something I had been working on for a while, mostly in dreams…

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      1. Avatar de jonicaggiano jonicaggiano dice:

        You have such a gift Francisco. I absolutely love your creation and application of the “Canticum Novum.” BRAVO 🤗❤️love to you both.

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      2. Thank you so much Joni. I am grateful for your words and humbled. Blessings to you both from us here in Spain 🇪🇸

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      3. Avatar de jonicaggiano jonicaggiano dice:

        You are most welcome. Blessings to you two always. ❤️

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  2. Avatar de azurea20 azurea20 dice:

    Qué bueno, cómo me gusta este post. Tomo nota de los poetas de Haikus.🌻 🌞 🌝🌻 🌞 🌝

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    1. Gracias 😊 Azurea. Me alegra mucho que te haya gustado, un saludo. 😊🌹🙏🏻

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  3. Avatar de Brad Osborne Brad Osborne dice:

    Another great example of the form, Francisco! I love this poem. I also like the name «Canticum Novum», but as the creator that is really up to you. But you need to finalize a name, so I know what to call them when I cover them in the «Whittled Words» series.

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    1. Thank you so much my friend. I think the name Euro-Ku should stick better and perhaps as a sur-name, «Canticum Novum» could be added. But I am putting it forward as the Euro-Ku, on this side of the Atlantic and Ameri-Ku on your side. What do you think?

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