Alas me quieren brotar,
que me eleven en vientos
y me lleven al lugar de mi razón de ser.
C.2022, Francis Bravo Cabrera, 21 de febrero de 2022, València, España 🇪🇸
NOTA BENE:
* Esta forma de expresar pensamientos, emociones o tonterías la llamo “Haikú europeo” porque aunque consta con los tres versos dinámicos e históricos del Haiku japonés, no se escribe con mente oriental, sino con el pensamiento, agudo y frito de un ser de occidente. Su regla principal es la paranoia y su regla insignificante es la auto-crítica. Ahora ¡a escribir!
JaZzArt en València 
❤
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Thank you Beth!
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I am not deep enough to appreciate the haiku form. This well done.
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I have invented a new form, the European Haiku, the “Euroku”. You will see more of it soon. No need for deep thoughts or deep understanding…
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interesting form
I can’t wait to read more poems
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Thank you Luisa, I am developing this new form that will be called the «Euroku». Piacere e buona settimana, un saluto!
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Delightful, Francisco. Happy haikuing or eurokuing.
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Yes, I am calling the «Euroku», thank you so much Pat!
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Fun word choice.
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Well, it has to be fun as it cannot reflect the more profound and complex thinking of the oriental. As Europeans we are soft thinkers, given more to the ego than to the pursuit of deep, introspective analysis…
What do you think?
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También me encanta la foto. Mucho. Un saludo.
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Gracias Azurea. Sabes donde hice esa foto?
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Most of us are shallower than we’d care to admit.
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For sure! But we’ve learned, over the centuries, to make profound our shallowness.
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Lol. Love it.
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I’ve always enjoyed reading haiku but never spent enough time and effort to write any myself. After reading your post, I did an online search for «European Haiku» because I wasn’t familiar with the term. I happened upon the website, https://europeankukai.blogspot.com/, and there was a verse by Bo Jaroszek of Poland which eloquently summed up my sad experience with my dog 15 days ago. It reads as follows:
tears in mine
trust in my dog’s eyes
the last injection
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I have always been intrigued by Haikus too. My version/style is the Euro-Ku, which seeks to truly bring the form to the European idiosyncrasy in thought and words. The three verses should flow coherently and clearly with the message/meaning and it should sound as simple as a pop song. Another differences that it should be accompanied by an original illustration that serves to amplify the message. I have published some a few days ago. And thank you so much Janet. I will definitely check out the link. Take good care and all the best.
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Beautiful
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Thank you so much 😊
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