Poem: Rain

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I seek the purest dreams,

irrational,

Intentional.

Under the rain it seems,

a lovely place,

a smiling face…

Why do I walk away,

Far from the sun,

under the rain?

Why do I trust in my

Unswerving faith,

far from the pain?

I know we need to clean

our twisted ways,

our darkened days.

We need the purity,

of a new start,

of cleansing rain…

C.2022, Francis Bravo Cabrera, 14 FEB 2022, València, España 🇪🇸

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  1. Avatar de beth beth dice:

    beautiful and there is always a chance for a new start

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    1. Yes there is Beth. Thank you so much!

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  2. Avatar de Brad Osborne Brad Osborne dice:

    Ah, yes, the cleansing power of rain. Great poem, Francisco!

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    1. Thank you so much my friend!

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  3. Avatar de ourcrossings ourcrossings dice:

    Without water, there is no life. Connecting to this precious resource can cleanse our mind, body, and soul. A wonderful poem, Francisco 🙂

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    1. Thank you so much Aiva! Yes! You are so right! All the best to you!

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  4. Avatar de macalder02 macalder02 dice:

    The raindrops wash our body and soul for a new beginning with new energy. Good good poem Francisco.

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    1. Muchísimas gracias Manuel, un abrazo.

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  5. Avatar de equipsblog equipsblog dice:

    Love this fresh metaphor.

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  6. Avatar de janetsm janetsm dice:

    I’m a few days behind in reading your blog. This poem made me think of the cleansing we can experience in crying. Our dog died on Monday and I’ve cried buckets of tears since his condition suddenly deteriorated last Saturday. It’s been a tough week, but each day gets a little easier. You maybe didn’t intend the connection between rain and tears, but that’s where my mind and heart went.

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    1. I am so very sorry to hear about your dog Janet. It is too sad to lose such a dear friend. Tears are a form of rain, I quite agree. Take good care and all the best,
      Francis

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      1. Avatar de janetsm janetsm dice:

        Thank you, Francis. He was indeed a dear friend and constant companion.

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      2. You’re very welcome Janet. Wishing you a lovely weekend.

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