Poem: “And if I don’t Believe You?”

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You who come like lightning in the night skies…

You who are the symbol of “the” truth…

You who light the way when evening’s sun dies…

You who guided my first thoughts from youth…

You who claim the high ground of morality…

You who are the champion right or wrong…

You that strokes our egos and our vanities…

Tell me when to sing a brand new song…

You that tells me what to think and smiling,

pat my shoulder, wink at me and nod,

what would you say if I told you quite frankly,

I don’t believe a single word you spoke…

C.2021, Francis Bravo Cabrera, 30 DEC 2021, València, España 🇪🇸

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beth dice:

12/31/2021 a las 09:42

cuts like a knife –

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1. valenciartist dice:
  
  12/31/2021 a las 09:49
  
  Thank you 😊 Beth.
  
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Easymalc dice:

12/31/2021 a las 10:14

I don’t always understand your poetry Francesc, but I understood this one ok 🙂

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1. valenciartist dice:
  
  12/31/2021 a las 15:18
  
  Thank you Malc, good friend, all the best and a ver very Happy New Year 🥳 to you and yours!!! With hope, love and peace from Spain 🇪🇸!!!
  
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  1. Easymalc dice:
    
    12/31/2021 a las 15:38
    
    Thanks Francesc and a Happy New Year to you and yours as well. Let’s all hope for a healthy and peaceful 2022 and I’ll be raising a glass to you tonight 🍷 🥂
    
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  2. valenciartist dice:
    
    12/31/2021 a las 16:22
    
    As I will to you my friend! 🥂
    
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Brad Osborne dice:

12/31/2021 a las 10:33

Loved this poem, my friend! We are not the sum of all the things we are told. We are the sum of what we choose to believe. This is smooth and lyrical in delivery. Thought provoking and questioning in context. A wonderful combination!

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1. valenciartist dice:
  
  12/31/2021 a las 15:17
  
  Yes we are Brad, my brother, you are so right! Thank you so much! All the best and a ver happy New Year to you and yours!
  
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azurea20 dice:

12/31/2021 a las 12:13

Yo creo que tú sí que sabes a quién va dirigido, los demás podemos hablar con ese «tú» a quien queramos. Me ha gustado.

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1. valenciartist dice:
  
  12/31/2021 a las 15:15
  
  Tienes razón Azurea y muchas gracias. Ha sido un orgullo y un placer compartir tantos comentarios y entradas al blog contigo y espero que sigan en el 2022. Un fuerte abrazo de València donde hoy gozamos de 20 grados!!!
  
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tiffanyarpdaleo dice:

12/31/2021 a las 18:22

Good one Francisco! Wishing you a happy and safe 2022! 🎉🍾🥳

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1. valenciartist dice:
  
  12/31/2021 a las 20:01
  
  Thank you Tiffany very much! And a very happy and healthy New Year to you and yours! 🎉🍾🥳
  
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Superduque dice:

01/01/2022 a las 17:29

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1. valenciartist dice:
  
  01/01/2022 a las 18:18
  
  Feliz año!
  
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