
To ride the silence of your thoughts in my ship of purple,
I spin the earth, motivate the winds, inflate the sails,
entice the oceans to make currents fast and wide
because we alone in silent dreams do abide…
To climb upon your purple thoughts of thunder and creation,
I flatten truth, unwind the clocks, connect the lights that brighten your dark street,
and empty out the bar so we alone within can drink…
C.2021, Francisco Bravo Cabrera, 25 NOV 2021, Valencia, Spain
Beautiful poem, Francisco! One great line followed by another. There are some phrases here that I wish I had written. Well done!
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Thank you my friend!
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Wonderful.
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Thank you George! All the best and a Happy Black Friday!
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Eek! The only store I’ll be going to is the grocery. Black Friday shoppers scare the heck out of me!! 😬
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True, so true, I am avoiding them as well.
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Precioso. Un saludo.
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Gracias Azurea, saludos de Valencia
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Wonderful poem with great lines. This new site is really expanding your poetic efforts.
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Thank you so much Pat! I truly appreciate your support!
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Have a great weekend.
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To ride the silence of your thoughts in my ship of purple, – great opening line that draws us in
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Thank you so much Beth!
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A delightful diversion in words and how very lovely and quite far afield from your normal in the graphic. Excellent. Thank you, FCB.
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Thank you very much Espie! I truly appreciate your words and it is good to see you back. All the best and a happy Friday to you!
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This is beautiful Francisco. I love these lines especially.
“I flatten truth, unwind the clocks, connect the lights that brighten your dark street,”
Gorgeous!! Hugs 🤗 Joni
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Thank you so much Joni! We wish you a lovely, peaceful and blessed day!
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You are an amazing poet Francisco. I read your poem on faith and was touched so deeply. I started a comment and was interrupted and want to read it to Scott. Have a lovely, peaceful and blessed day you two. ❤️
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Thank you so much Joni! All our love, peace and happiness to you and Scott and your entire family. Tonight is our great feast and celebration of the nativity of our Lord Jesus and we wish you always His blessings.
❤
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Oh thank you so very much for your kindness and thoughtfulness. I too wish your family a wonderful evening of celebration of the birth of Christ. May you be surrounded by His blessings always. Love to you both. From our family to yours. ❤️🤗🥰🎄🎄✝️✝️
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Thank you 🙏🏻 Joni, and amen 🙏🏻
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❤️🎄
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