POEM: “Fish”

The city is the fishbowl where I live,

I am a fish…

Not a gold one,

not a guppy,

not a meaty one that you can trap and fry,

Not a pretty one at all…

I have scales of iron,

teeth like knives,

my colour is as black as night,

and from the deep and dark I rise…

The city is my fishbowl

and the water seems quite foul,

as I swim through streets and avenues, without a light,

without a sound…

C.2021, Francisco Bravo Cabrera, 23 NOV 2021, València, Spain 🇪🇸

10 Comentarios

  1. Avatar de Brad Osborne Brad Osborne dice:

    Interesting perspective, my friend! I enjoyed this poem.

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    1. Thank you so much my friend!

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  2. Avatar de beth beth dice:

    ooh, so dark and moody….

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    1. Yes…thank you so much Beth…

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  3. Avatar de equipsblog equipsblog dice:

    Barracuda, shark, or piranha? Quite a predator fish, I’m guessing. Very atmospheric.

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    1. Something like a mix of those three…thank you Pat! 😊🍷🌹

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  4. Avatar de azurea20 azurea20 dice:

    Aquí se llaman doradas. Muy distinto del mensaje de tu poema. Un saludo.

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    1. Si, y mucho que me gustan, un saludo Azurea

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  5. Having lived in one of the largest cities in the world I felt the same way. Mermaid-approved. 🙂

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    1. Yes, that’s how it is… Cheers 😊

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