Poem: “CLOUDS”

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The world we love will always be our refuge.

The lessons that I’ve learned I will transmit.

I’ve been sending my messages in verses,

I’d like to one day think that I’ll succeed.

I came from one lone star above the waters,

I turned into a drop of raging sea.

Upon the beach a grain of sand resembled

the very thing that life has given me.

I am a face that mixes, blends and merges,

into the multitudes that walk and hope and dreams.

I’ve learned from every soul that smiled and welcomed,

that welcomed my beliefs and what I’ve been.

I’ve been a cloud that loves the blueness of the sky,

the brilliance of the sun,

the power of the breeze.

C.2022, Francisco Bravo Cabrera, 10 APR 2022, Miami Beach, Florida (USA)

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  1. Avatar de jonicaggiano jonicaggiano dice:
    04/11/2022 a las 19:37

    This is really a testimony to being a loving, caring individual who has a great big talented heart that takes all the love he has embraced and gives it right back as does your precious family. Mixing with nature along with your faith and sharing a feeling of peace. Beautiful! Love to you both ❤️

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    1. Avatar de valenciartist valenciartist dice:
      04/11/2022 a las 23:46

      Thank you so much Joni for your lovely words. I truly appreciate it. Love and blessings to you both. ♥️🙏🏻😊

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  2. Avatar de ourcrossings ourcrossings dice:
    04/12/2022 a las 04:03

    I came from one lone star above the waters…. such a beautiful sentence, Francisco, as is the poem! Thanks for sharing and have a lovely day 🙂 Aiva xx

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    1. Avatar de valenciartist valenciartist dice:
      04/12/2022 a las 08:45

      Thank you Aiva, very much! You too, a lovely day to you 😊

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  3. Avatar de Brad Osborne Brad Osborne dice:
    04/12/2022 a las 04:55

    Wonderful poem, my brother! Existential and ethereal, it is woven with such wonderful images and phrases. The ending was superb! Well written, Francisco!

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    1. Avatar de valenciartist valenciartist dice:
      04/12/2022 a las 08:40

      Thank you Brad! Very much!

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  4. Avatar de equipsblog equipsblog dice:
    04/12/2022 a las 09:32

    Obviously a force of nature.. 😉

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    1. Avatar de valenciartist valenciartist dice:
      04/12/2022 a las 10:04

      For sure Pat, no doubt.

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  5. Avatar de janetsm janetsm dice:
    04/12/2022 a las 13:21

    Beautiful poem, Francis. I like how you’re able to put your readers inside an object like a cloud so we can experience what it must be like to be a cloud or a drop of rain. Amazing writing!

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    1. Avatar de valenciartist valenciartist dice:
      04/12/2022 a las 13:36

      Thank you so much Janet! Wishing you all the best.

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  6. Avatar de TiffanyArpDaleo tiffanyarpdaleo dice:
    04/13/2022 a las 12:48

    Absolutely beautiful, Francisco, well done!

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    1. Avatar de valenciartist valenciartist dice:
      04/13/2022 a las 14:49

      Thank you so much Tiffany!

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